Make me long to fly
Across the silver twilight
Into the abyss of the sky.
Pine trees, solitude
And you, are entwined
In the cool stillness of night,
Embalming my mind.
Moonbeams caress my face
Now aglint with silver streams
And trees silently scream,
Cut down, along with fatal dreams.
ekhai, miss chu i reh vang vang a, hei eng emaw ril tak nen i rawn lang leh ta nawlh mai niin a lang e.. I dam tha zel ang chu maw..
ReplyDeletekeini zawngin ' a sang em a ka phak lo ani' tih kha kan sak tur ni awm tak a ni. Ka hriatthiam dan nia ka hriat hi a dik chuan a nalh hle mai :)
ReplyDeletenalh topsss..i envy u. :)
ReplyDelete@puia: nia hei ka inthiamlo khop mai, tunlai chu buai leh thatchhiat ka fawm a, ka blog ka ngaihsak lo lutuk a, a hmingin hei hi ka rawn post ve mai mai nih hi. Ka dam ve viau toh e, ty.
ReplyDelete@amuana: I hriatthiam dan kha a dik chiah. Poetry te chu mahni a a thawh dan apiang hi dik a ni mai lom ni? Min chhiarsak a ka lawm e.
@almost unreal: nuam eee...thanks!
Van tha leh si ve aw, han phuah ve thiam ila chuan khawlumzia vel hi tunlai chu ka phuah ang :-)
ReplyDeleteUnder the pine trees...NEHU, Shillong a lang thin..A nuam a ni, lungrual taka far thing hnuaia riahrun han belh kha. Suihlung mu hnu a kaitho e
ReplyDeleteNice nice.. lung a ti leng !!
ReplyDeletekei pawh sawmpuia ang hian khaw lum zia vel hi ka phuah ang ! :D
@ sawmpuia and Joseph: khaw lum hian lunglen a hnawt tiau deuh ni tur a ni, khaw lum lam phuah hi an vang viau tak a sin mawle...hehe! A phuah hmasa ah han tang ula!
ReplyDelete@vana: nia, shillong khu chuan lung len dan chi hrang hrang in i lung a tih len ka ring..lolzzz. Under the pine trees lungrual taka thut tih i sawi rual khan far pangang ka rilru ah zuk han lang tlat peka...poetic loh theih ve!!
Lovely verse on lung ti leng pine trees. Hmanlai Shillong rim a nam raih mai.
ReplyDeleteKa music ngaihthlak lai mek nen inhmeh bawnra lutukkk, Chopin's 'Fantasie Impromptu' ka mur leh chuai chuai tawh :-) He music hi I neih chuan ngaithla pahin chhiar ve lok teh, inrem lutuk hi.. I neih loh chuan lemme know, ka rawn thawn ang che. A music ah pawh a tir lam ni lo, a lai vel, 1:20 mins vel achin kha. Chuan ka mittui te titla leh trepin ka hria I thil ziah hi, nalh lutuk!
ReplyDeleteChuan a poem nen, music nen, maimitchhing ila pine rim te hriat rum rum theih :D
ReplyDelete@mesjay...thanks. Nia I suppose Shillong makes everyone nostalgic...something about the scents and the brisk air and the sounds and the tastes intermingling!
ReplyDelete@ Jerusha..it's always such a pleasure to read your encouraging comments. I'm glad you like it.It's such a relief to come across someone who shares the same feelings. Chopin chu ka ngaithla ve zeuh2 a, pakhat mah ka nei lo thung...min rawn thawn theih phawt chuan ka lawm vur2 ngawt ang!
"Pine trees and you" a mi "you" khi chuan a lo comment leh hman der tawh a ni mawwww *GRIN* Nuam a ti awm, amah vanga i phuah chhan te maw a ti leh pek awm siaaaa.... A hlim hmel ka mitthla ah ka hmu nghal... :-)
ReplyDelete@illusionaire: some things are not as they seem! Ka sawi tam lo mai ang. :)
ReplyDeleteNice one...clap,clap!
ReplyDelete*ENCORE*
Rawn thawn ang, email ID ka mamawh dawn sia, heta pekchhuah hi I hreh em?
ReplyDeleteWhat a fabulous piece of poetry. You get us wafting along serenely on a magical cloud of pine trees, silver twilights, cool night breezes and warm moonbeams and then kapow, the last two lines cut into the dream-like haze like an executioner's blade. Ouch.
ReplyDelete@jerusha, ka hmu a,ka download mek e... ka va lawm em!
ReplyDelete@calliopia, thanks...as for the "ouch" part, well...that's how life goes, isn't it?
@daggylo...I'm taking a bow..thanks!
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