This one is for two poet-friends, who read this and thought I should put it in my blog for easy access. So here goes:
And now, it is time
To write you a poem;
The one that you wanted,
The one that scared me,
The one that mourns
The passing of you,
You, who have been my poetry.
When they analyzed it nursing endless cups of tea in an authentic little Khasi jadoh stall, while simultaneously murdering many pieces of kwai in the recesses of their mouths, it sounded a lot more philosophical and 'deeper' than it probably does to you, dear reader. Among the phrases flung about were, "the paradox of the situation", "the chicken and the egg question", "circularity", etc. They should probably come here and explain.
I don't get the "circularity" here, Ma'am :-(
ReplyDeleteFor example, one can always writes a Poem on someone who physically no longer lived YET still living in one's heart.
I guess the whole thing about writing a poem about the death of someone who is the poem... How can you write a poem on the death of something which has been poetry to you? The impossibility and the irony of stating that impossibility in the form of a POEM again... it just goes round and round....hehe
ReplyDeleteThe one I was thinking can at least be a Narrative Poem :-)
ReplyDeleteIt will be a Poem "dedicated to" or "written for" a person who no longer lives, but is based on that person.
[ I don't know much about Poems, though I at times drowned myself into it. Let me wait for more analysis.
Thanks for the reply. ]
Heyyy I should be thanking YOU for dropping by, @fela!! Thanks...!
ReplyDeleteYou forgot the comma :)
ReplyDeleteHaha, yes I did, doggone it! Thanks, have corrected it. Btw...I can't access your blog @Sanga. What gives?
ReplyDeleteTry this... lalnunsangaralte.blogspot.in/?m=1
DeleteTry this
ReplyDeletelalnunsangaralte.blogspot.in/?m=1
Is it ready for official unveiling you think?
whoah... this is like Inception! :)
ReplyDelete@Sanga: ok, checking it out asap.
ReplyDelete@Mizohican: lol... wish it were half as intricate and riveting!
I've read this when you posted it on Facebook, and thought it was simple and beautiful, something about getting up and moving on. But now with the complex analyses and the paradoxes I'm not so sure anymore.
ReplyDeletehaha @Aduhi, the complex analyses is just another perspective. If you enjoy it as a simple, uncomplicated poem about saying goodbye and moving on, that was certainly part of what motivated the poem.
ReplyDeletepoesis in motion! That's my artsy-fartsy best!
ReplyDeletelol Philo.... Honored that you dropped by.
ReplyDeleteThis one was brilliant when you showed me the handwritten copy in that little jadoh stall. It is brilliant now. It will always be.
ReplyDeleteAnd for your readers -
please do not fret over analyses because you cannot appreciate the flight of a bird by killing it and dissecting its wings.
This one was brilliant when you showed me the handwritten copy in that little jadoh stall. It is brilliant now. It will always be.
ReplyDeleteAnd for your readers -
please do not fret over analyses because you cannot appreciate the flight of a bird by killing it and dissecting its wings.
Dear Unknown, thank you :)
ReplyDeleteIs this Dr. Cherie Chhangte?
ReplyDeleteMinimalism is always best. The more understated something is, the more universal its appeal.
ReplyDelete@Sandip: uh...yes :)
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ReplyDeleteOk...now you've got me curious @ David. What have you been saying that you keep deleting? Haha.
DeleteElegy at its sweetest short/shortest sweet... errrrr? :)
ReplyDelete....finish the sentence!! :)
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ReplyDeleteperhaps the dil
ReplyDeleteemma was that
words are nev
er enough
to comment
on (your) art...
Haha.... nice, ambivalent way of putting it :) But thank you (I think)!
Deletewonder where
ReplyDeletesome can mail
some of their
their musings to you...
You're welcome to do so at chhangte.mzu@gmail.com, David. Looking forward to reading 'em.
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DeleteYou're welcome too
ReplyDeleteTo do so at
davidhmar70@yahoo.com
Daydreambeliever
Looking forward to reading 'em.
ps
wonder if
daydreambelievers
Believe at night
too??